He held a hank of her hair, watching the gold strands drift through his fingers. Forty years old, but eleven in comprehension, he stared into her unblinking eyes and began to cry. He hadn’t meant to squeeze so hard…

Author’s Note: This one is just a quick throwaway in response to Chuck Wendig’s prompt to tell a complete story in just three sentences. I hope I did some justice to the prompt. Chuck’s blog, Terribleminds, can be found here.

About Kate Loveton

Aspiring novelist. Avid reader of fiction. Reviewer of books. By day, my undercover identity is that of meek, mild-mannered legal assistant, Kate Loveton, working in the confines of a stuffy corporate law office; by night, however, I'm a super hero: Kate Loveton, Aspiring Novelist and Spinner of Tales. My favorite words are 'Once upon a time... ' Won't you join me on my journey as I attempt to turn a hobby into something more?
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22 Responses to Intent

  1. Lucy says:

    Good one, Sister. Lucy

  2. Just perfect Kate – where’s the book that goes with this?

  3. Kate, you are so talented! Loved this. It spoke volumes πŸ™‚

  4. Three sentences but such power behind them. Excellent work, Kate! ❀

  5. willow1945 says:

    Very touching and very well done–a story in three sentences! Hats off to you!

  6. Helen Espinosa says:

    Wow! Well done, Kate! Amazing how much you packed into 3 sentences!

  7. Excellent. I have lots of questions because there’s lots between the line! πŸ™‚

  8. Kate, you achieved the right pathos here and in three sentences that’s admirable. i find this story very very touching.
    My best to you

  9. mihrank says:

    very interesting!

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